We watched The Birthday Burglar and we read Beaten By a Balloon and the Jamie wrote this story. How many "b" words did she use?
Once upon a time there lived a bear called Backly. He was a bad bear but he was brave. Backly stole stuff from the bank. He had bad behaviour! He lived on a brown bank with his bus and his bee. His bee was called Ben, and another bee called Benjimen. Benjimen was brave like Backly, but Ben was weak like a bun. Backly decided he couldn't stay with them so Ben went back to his room and packed his bag. He was glum.
Backly and Benjimen were lonely without Ben so they went out to find him. They couldn't find Ben anywhere. They looked in every bee hive. They even found his brother, but not him.
Backly found a bird on duck shooting day. The bird was called Bean. Bean was bored of being a messenger bird. Backly took him home in a box.
I did lots of b words!!!!
ReplyDeletejamie
Great story Jamie
ReplyDeleteI counted 40.
ReplyDelete-Jacob